BartonD VisualPoem from Kapaa Middle School MEDIA on Vimeo.
My poem is about Cultural Relation and how two different places can be so alike. The impact that my visuals have is showing how two different cultures dress and how beautiful the places are and alike. Another impact that my visuals have is making you feel like you have experienced the culture. The visuals I have for my poem is my old hula group, the thai festival called Loi Katong, some pictures of hula concerts, and tahitian costumes.
The special effects I used was ken burns and different transitions. Some of the kens burn effect show how the thai people wear gold on their heads and hands. So with some images you get a close up. The overall meaning is that its suppose to grab you're attention and show how the cultures are alike, but somewhat different.
I kind of am satisfied with my results because I showed the two cultures that I have experienced and got to share it with everyone. But I could have made it better by trying to get either photos or video of turtles, a dragon statue, Thailand, and Tahiti because I only had pictures of hula, Tahitian, and the thai festival.
good visuals
ReplyDeletea little loud
good lyrics
good b-roll
ReplyDeletesome picture were blury
nice voice overs
Compliment: applicable B-roll
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Repetitive B-roll
Compliment:IDK
The poem was really creative, and about an interesting topic
ReplyDeleteThe pictures looked stretched
The shots were very cool, and creative.
Good B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteSome of the pictures were blurry.
Good audio.
I like the audio.
ReplyDeleteThe b-roll could have been more high quality.
I like the different photos you had.
good loud voice
ReplyDeletemaybe make high quality
good b roll
Great audio your voice was really clear.
ReplyDeleteYou might have wanted to transform your pictures a little better.
Great use of the Ken Burns effect it really helped make your visual poem more interesting.
Compliments:The b-roll was unique to your family
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:The pic was stretched
Compliment:The poem was awesome
I liked how you compared certain things in the poem.
ReplyDeleteI think your visuals could have been taken better.
Other than that your visual poem was great and I liked the poem itself.
clear audio
ReplyDeleteblurry on a lot of shots
good job
I really liked your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should use some video in it.
Really nice usage of the ken burn's effect.
I like your B-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better is the speed of your reading.
I really like the content of your A-roll.
The pictures were nice with the Kens Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteThe b-roll didn't match the a-roll in my opinion
All the imagery was a lot to take in, but it was nice
nice pictures of the people in costumes
ReplyDeletereally blurry
nicely done
I like your b-roll.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is for your reading to go a little faster.
I also like how clear you talked.
I really like your poem but it was a little confusing what it was actually about. Great b-roll of the past photos.
ReplyDeleteI like how your b-roll
ReplyDeleteYou have lots of pictures and not much video
I like the imagery of thailand
I liked how you had pictures of when you were little.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures were kinda blurry and kinda stretched out.
Really good audio.
Nice voice over
ReplyDeleteThe were not a variety of clips.[mostly dancers]-[some blurry]
Over all the images looked great
I like the pictures, they went with what you were saying
ReplyDeleteNeeded to read it slower
i liked it overall
Your poem is good. Some of the pictures are blurry or hard to see
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